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After reading the book names THE ADVENTURES OF TOM SAWYER .My heart moves and I have some things to say.
The story tell a boy calles Tom Sawyer.He was naughty,lucky,brave and interesting.He went to school like us,but he didn't like that.He went to play nearly all day ,like swimming and catching fish in the river,and even having rest under a tree.
In his life ,there is a blue sky,a lot of trees,not much homework,not much unhappyness,not any.Just running with a smiling face,just played and plated,for all days,all nights.
And one day,there is something exciting happenes.Tom Sawyer saw a terrible killer,he was afraid of him,but brave,he told the about it.On another day,Tom Sawyer lost his way in a cave for some days,he was hungry and thirsty then,but never gave up.He got the last sunshine in the end and to be alive.
Tom Sawyer,a lucky boy.He found the treasure with his braveness,wisdom,luck.He was the richest man !He was excellent with his strong points,and what do I have?I need to sduty towards him.
To be tough.Don't be afraid from the test again.USe my time with my hot heart.Hope the furture with trying hard.
To be happy.If there is something unlucky,I won't be so sad.Sadness couldn't make a boy happy.Just to be happy to do something successfully.And after that,there is more smile on my heart.
To be informed.A good way can help you to do many things with less time.And books are very useful to rise up my wisdom.I think so,I'll try .
To be brave.Braveness is one of the most important to kill off the difficulty.I can't lost,also you.
Yesh,our world is much difficult and different than Tom Sawyer's.But there is a sentence in China.It says that'other times ,other manners.'And we must fit our life.To learn something good from TOM Sawyer,to make ourselves better.

Answer 1

我该在括号里了
After reading the book （names）/ (named)THE ADVENTURES OF TOM SAWYER .（My heart moves）/（i am moved） and (删除了I) have some things to say.
形容书中的故事，一般都用一般现在时，因此，故事中的情节一类，都要改成一般现在时，下面都用一般现在时,但是也有特殊情况，去问问老师吧
The story tell (tells)a boy calles/(called) Tom Sawyer.He was (is)naughty,lucky,brave and interesting(形容人不能用interesting，cute).He went （goes）to school like us,but he didn't /doesn''t like that.He [went to](删去)play nearly all day ,like{as} swimming and catching fish in the river,and even having rest under a tree.
In his life ,there is a blue sky,a lot of trees,not much homework,not much unhappyness,not any.Just running with a smiling face,just played/playing and plated(这个词也应该是played吧，但也要改成playing),(for all days,all nights.)/-（days and nights）
And one day,there is something exciting happenes/(happened0.Tom Sawyer saw(sees0 a terrible killer,he was afraid of him,but brave,{he told the about it}这句话想表达什么不明白.On another day,Tom Sawyer lost his way in a cave for some days,he was hungry and thirsty then,but never gave up.He got the last sunshine in the end and to be alive.
Tom Sawyer,a lucky boy.He found the treasure with his braveness,wisdom,luck/lucky.He was the richest man !He was excellent with his strong points,and what do I have?I need to sduty towards/(from) him.
To be tough.Don't be afraid from the test again.USe my time with my hot heart.(Hope the furture with trying hard. )这句也不知道你想说什么
To be happy.If there is something unlucky,I won't be so sad.Sadness couldn't make a boy happy.Just to be happy to do something successfully.And after that,there is more smile on my heart/faces.
To be informed.A good way can help you to do many things with less time.And books are very useful to rise up my wisdom.I think so,I'll try .
To be brave.Braveness is one of the most important 少东西（things )to (kill off)/(overcome) the difficulties.I can't lost,(also )/(nor do )you.
Yesh,our world is much difficult and different than Tom Sawyer's.But there is a sentence in China.It says that'other times ,other manners.'And we must fit our life.To learn something good from TOM Sawyer,to make ourselves better.

Answer 2

有蛮难的改，错误太多（不想得这分）
After reading the book that named THE ADVENTURES OF TOM SAWYER .My heart was moved and I had to something about this book.
The story talked about a boy called Tom Sawyer.

Answer 3

names - named
.My heart moves - , I was very touched
and I have some things to say - and here are some of my thoughts
tell a boy calles - talks about a boy called
like that - like it
went to play - played
swimming and catching fish - going swimming and fishing
there is a blue sky - there was blue sky
unhappyness - unhappiness
not any - or anything else unpleasant
for all days, all nights - all day and all night
there is something exciting happenes - something exciting happened
afraid of him - afraid of the killer
but brave - but being so brave
the about it - the ?? about it
on another day - then there was another day
Tom Sawyer lost his way in a cave for some days - when Tom got lost in a cave for a few days
He got the last sunshine in the end and to be alive - He had his chance at last and survived
Tom Sawyer, a lucky boy - Tom Sawyer was a lucky boy
braveness - courage
wisdom, luck - wisdom and luck
was the richest man - became the richest man
He was excellent with his strong points - he knew what his advantages were and how to use them
study towards him - learn from him
Don't be afraid from the test - to not be afraid of tests
with my hot heart - with care
hope the future with trying hard - ??? work hard towards my future
if there is something unlucky - if something bad happens
sadness couldn't make a boy happy - ?????
to be happy - be happy
to do something successfully - and try to be successful in everything you do
there is - there will be
more smile on my heart - more lightness in my heart
To be informed. A good way can help you to do many things with less time - To be better informed, which is a good way to help you accomplish more things in less time
to rise up my wisdom - in expanding one's knowledge
Braveness is one of the most important to kill off the difficulty - Courage is one of most important weapons one can have while facing difficulties
I can't lost,also you. - I won't lose again, neither will you.
yesh - of course
much difficult - much more difficult
sentence - saying
.It says - that says
that'other times ,other manners - ?????
fit our life - ???
To learn something good - We should learn some good things
, to make ourselves better - to improve ourselves

Answer 4

After reading the book names（named） THE ADVENTURES OF TOM SAWYER .My heart moves(has been moved) and I have some things(some thing) to say.
The story tell(去掉 tell,改为is about) a boy calles（called） Tom Sawyer.He was naughty,lucky,brave and interesting.He went to school like us,but he didn't like that(改为it).He went to play (直接用played)nearly all day(加个 long) ,like swimming and (去掉 and 用逗号)catching fish in the river,and even having rest（just resting） under a tree.
In his life ,there is a blue sky,a lot of trees,not much homework,not much unhappyness,not any(前面的逗号去掉，并且不用not any 用at all).Just running （run）with a smiling face,just played and plated(play and play),for all days,(and)all nights.
And one day,there is （was）something exciting happenes.Tom Sawyer saw a terrible killer,he was afraid of him,but (being)brave,he told the about it.On another day,Tom Sawyer lost his way in a cave (and was trapped)for some(several)days,he was hungry and thirsty then,but never gave up.He got the last sunshine in the end and to be alive(survived).
Tom Sawyer,a lucky boy.He found the treasure with his braveness,wisdom,luck(and fortune).He was the richest man !He was excellent with his strong points,and what do I have?I need to sduty towards him(learn from him).
To(去掉to)be tough.Don't be afraid from(of) the test again.USe(spend)my time with my hot heart.Hope the furture with trying hard.(try my best and look forward to a bright future)
To(去掉to) be happy.If there is something unlucky,I won't be so sad.Sadness couldn't make a boy happy(be happy again).Just to(去掉to)be happy to(去掉to加 and) do something successfully.And after that,there is（must be）more smile on my heart.
To(去掉to)be informed.A good way can help you to(去掉to)do many (much)things with less time.And books are very useful （beneficial）to rise up（直接用raise) my wisdom.I think so,I'll try .
To （去to）be brave.Braveness is one of the most important(加个thing)to kill off(overcome) the difficulty.I can't lost(lose),also you(you too).
Yesh,our world is much difficult and different than Tom Sawyer's.(yes,our world is much complicatid than and different from the of Tom Sawyer's.)But there is a sentence in China.It says that'other times ,other manners.'(此句谚语没弄明白，呵呵)And we must fit our life.To（去to)earn something good from TOM Sawyer,to(and) make ourselves better.