【100分】请英语达人帮忙翻译这一句话（谢绝翻译工具）

Question

本人英语不够好，要给外国发信，但是怕遇到语法错误，特请高手指点（意思相符即可，不用逐字逐字的翻）

由于我回程的飞机票出了一点问题，第一周（9月3日-9月5日）可能赶不到纽约，希望老师您第一周能允许我请一次假，从第二周再开始上课。
我希望我本学期的课能安排到每天下午4点以后，周二到周五对我比较合适，谢谢

Answer 1

Dear Mr.X

There are some problems with my air ticket, I am afraid that I cannot fly back to New York to attend my first-week-classes Can I ask my first week off from you ? I will start my lessons from the second week on.

Could it be possible that my classes in this semester
were arranged at afternoons after 4 pm from Tuesday to Friday? It would be very nice of you to do so.

Dear Mr.X

There are some problems with my air ticket, I am afraid that I cannot fly back to New York to attend my first-week-classes Can I ask my first week off from you ? I will start my lessons from the second week on.

Could it be possible that my classes in this semester
were arranged at afternoons after 4 pm from Tuesday to Friday? It would be very nice of you to do so.

Answer 2

Due to my problem with the return ticket, I am not able to arrive in New York in the first week (Sept. 3 - 5) of this term. Can I ask my first week off and I will start my lessons from the second week on.

By the way, I would very much appreciate it if my classes of this term could be scheduled after 4 pm. I prefer Tuesday and Friday if possible. Thank you in advance.

Answer 3

As the air ticket of returnning is in trouble,I possibly can't reach New York in the first week,from 3rd,September-5th,September.I hope you can allow me a holiday once,and have classes in the second week.
Also,I wish the courses in this term could be arranged after 4 o'clock every afternoon,and it is comfortable for me to take the course from Tuesday to Friday.

Thank you!(小伙子,看看吧)

Answer 4

Dear Sir or Madame,
There is something problem with my return air ticket, I am afraid that I cannot manage to fly back to New York to attend my classes for the first week (Sept.3rd to Sept.5th). Therefore I would like to ask you for a leave for not being able to attend the classes. I will attend my classes from the second week.
Is is possible to arrange my classes after 16 pm. every day from Tuesday to Friday? Many Thanks!
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Name.

Answer 5

Dear Sir or Madame,

I am afraid that I can not arrive at New York in the the first week (3rd/Sep- 5th/Sep),because my ticket for coming back has a little problems.I hope that my dear teacher( 一般直接写MR或MISS某某）allows me to leave during the first week ,and go to class from the second week .
I hope all classes of this term could be arranged after 4:00pm on Tuesday and Friday because it is more convenience for me .thank you very much !

Yours sincerely
你的名字

如果你所给的中文意思正确，英文就没有问题！

Answer 6

As I have problem in my return air tickets,I may not arrive in the New York the first week(Sep.3rd--Sep.5th) and hope you (better write your teacher's name) allow me to ask for a leave and have classes from the second week.
I hope my schedule of this semester could be arranged after four o'clock every afternoon. Tuesday and Friday will be suitable for me.
Thank you!
我觉得要写的简单易懂点吧！