急，写一封英文邮件向外教询问英语成绩的~~~~~~

Question

是一直教我们的而且是很熟悉的外教，这是我自己写的~I am writing to enquire about the results of the exam. Is there a tiding or not? If you've got the outcome could you let me know please? I’m looking forward to receiving your replay soon. 不知道这么写有没有什么错误的地方。请求各位大侠赐教~

Answer 1

Mr. XXX（外教名）
Hello, I am writing this to know my score about the examination. Really appreciate that if you tell me.
My student number is XXXX.
Have a nice day!

XXX（你的名字）

外国人没什么花花肠子，直接问就好。

Answer 2

Dear Mr. :
I'm writing to you with the hope of knowing my English mark for this semester.Waiting for your early reply.
Yours sincerely.
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