请教翻译高手几句话(中译英)--机器翻译等勿进 谢谢

这几句话我怎么都翻不好,
1 一只甲虫躺在青石上,绝望地空划着细腿。她小心地帮它翻身。
2 孩子们猫着腰,端着网,在捕蜻蜓。她摇着一根树枝把蜻蜓赶跑……
3 那只蜜蜂滚得浑身是土,疲惫地昏头昏脑地爬。
4 孩子们把它拨向西,它向西爬,又被拨向东。她走过去,一脚把那只蜜蜂踩死了。

以上句子原文出自《树林里的上帝》,作者 史铁生

第1个回答  2011-01-04
1 Laying on the grassy rock, a beatle's waving its legs above desperately. She's helping it turnover carefully.
2 In order to catch the dragonflies, the kids are bowing like cats, with holding the nets in their hands. She's driving away the creatures by waving a branch of tree.
3 That bee is crawling with all over the mug and tiredsome.
4 The kids are playing with the bee, from west to east, no matter what direction, the little creature is running forward. Then she's coming over, stapping it to death.
第2个回答  2011-01-04
1. a bettle laid on the cyan stone, desperately kicking its skinny legs. She carefully helped it flip itself over
2. Children bending down, holding nets, they are catching dragonflies. She held a branch and chased the dragonflies away.
3. The bee rolled around full of dirt, and dizzily continued to crawl
4. children pushed it to the west, it crawled towards the west, then it was pushed again to the east. She came over and stepped on the bee, killing it
自翻
第3个回答  2011-01-05
同意。你真有自知之明(上下周围不是人人都有)。这么漂亮的原文,弄不好就被糟蹋了。且让我试翻(示范?)一下,力争正确、准确和传神:

1. A bettle laid on the stone, desperately kicking its skinny legs. She carefully helped flip it over.
2. The kids bent down, net in hand, trying to catch the dragonfly. She shook a branch to chase the dragonfly away.
3. The bee wallowed in the dirt and continued to crawl drowsily in fatigue.
4. When the kids pushed it towards the west, it crawled westward before it was pushed eastward again. She went over and squashed the bee with her foot.

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第4个回答  2011-01-04
1 A bettle was lying on the cyan stone, kicking its skinny legs desperately. She carefully helped it flip over itself
2 The children bent down and held nets, trying to catch dragonflies. She held a branch and chased the dragonflies away.
3. The bee rolled around and became full of dirt and dizzily crawled
4. The children pushed the bee to the west, it crawled towards the west, and then it was pushed to the east. She came over to it and stepped it to death.
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