请问谁能帮忙解决以下英语单句改错，要求：1.指出原因；2.指出问题并改正。谢谢！

Question

I'm writing to you to recommend zhou tong
one of my friend,for this post.with his outstanding leadership and cheerful personality,he hand elected
much times president of the student union of our university busy although he was , he completed his
major , upon graduation he.s assigned to be teacher in a middle school . in addition to , he loves his job
and enjoys working with children , it was won him •great popularity among his student , but i do not
•hesitate to recommend him for an ideal candidate i" m surely you ' lj make a wise decision in hiring him

Answer 1

易改的检查结果还是蛮清晰的，你可以参考下。下次有类似问题可以借助易改。解释和修改建议都有。

Answer 2

I'm writing to you to recommend zhou tong
one of my friends,for this post.
friend 改为 friends
with his outstanding leadership and cheerful personality,he had been elected
改为 被动语态
for many times president of the student union of our university
much 改为for many times 是可数名词复数
busy as he was ,
although 改为 as
he completed his majors ,
major 改为 majors
after graduation
upon 改为 after
he was assigned to be a teacher in a middle school .
's改为 was teacher 前加a
in addition , he loves his job
把to 去掉 下面 改了几处 供参考
and enjoys working with children , which made him win great popularity among his students, so i do not hesitate to recommend him as an ideal candidate i' m sure you ' ll make a wise decision in hiring him本回答被网友采纳

Answer 3

1,Like most people ,I was brought up to (C)this important discovery: giving我也不是很有把握，但是感觉这样比较通顺。 2.

Answer 4

同志请问你写的这是不是一篇文章或者是一段话啊？太杂乱无章了 整片看下来没有几个是对的