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Question

Dear Chengye
How are you?I’like to tell you something about the Mid-autumn Festival.People usually eat moon cakes and admire the full moon.There are two kinds of moon cakes.they are sweet moon cakes and salty moon cakes.I like sweet moon cakes with beans,but I don’t like salty moon cakes whit egg.I love take photos.I'll take some Ice Cream Mooncakes photos on the fifteenth day of the eighth lunar month.I will send you some then.
Yours
Clara

Answer 1

第一行 I'd like to , moon cakes我印象里是写到一起的mooncakes
admire。。你是想表达赏月的意思么？不要用admire。。admire一般带有钦佩啊什么的意思
就用watch都行。。动作主体应该是“看”
第三行but用的牵强，你是在告诉别人你的喜好，并没有转折关系，用and就行
第四行开头I love to take，然后I'll take some photos of Icecream Mooncakes

Answer 2

Dear Chengye
How are you?I’d like to tell you something about the Mid-autumn Festival.People usually eat moon cakes and admire the full moon.There are two kinds of moon cakes.they are sweet moon cakes and salty moon cakes.I like sweet moon cakes with beans,but I don’t like salty moon cakes with egg.I love taking photos.I'll take some Ice Cream Mooncakes photos on the fifteenth day of the eighth lunar month.I will send you some then.
Yours
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