求!!!急!学霸帮忙,英语短文改错,这是一篇范文。。。里面有十个地方错误,我只能找到一个,求学霸帮忙
有十个错误
追答are变is
beautiful后面加one
第二段:remembered that it was
最后一句:I hope you will befine.这样写好一些
追问我觉得应该是remember that there was
追答be fine 要分开,打错了
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追问这个不是作文,是改错。。
追答哦哦
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有十个错误
追答remember that it was
by chance b是小写
in the daily life i小写
who is very warm hearted
追问是remember that there was
追答it在这里应该是作为形式主语吧
追问i can well remember that there was a time when 是安妮日记里的固定句型
追答最后第二行helpful后面应该要加一个that
追问consideration是名词helpful是形容词
追答对啊
追问所以不能并列
所以不能并列
追答help
追问help是动词。。。
追答那前面的be动词不是也要改成were?
makes要改成make?
help也可以是名词啊,比如your help
追问好吧
追答嗯呢
这样有10个了吗
追问还没有。。
追答我觉得最后一句是hoping
追问be well是对的吗。。感觉有点错
追答我看看
be well好像是用于身体上康复比较多吧
you will be better,暗指“现在和将来”有一个先后对比,你会更好