请帮我看看下面的英语句子是否有误，表达是否不够得体、地道，好吗？谢谢！

Question

（12月7号那天，我们学校有外教来，老师说每个去听课的同学都要准备自我介绍和想外教提两个问题。
请帮我看看下面的英语句子语法是否有误，表达是否不够礼貌、地道，或是否表达地过于啰嗦，好吗？谢谢！）
Hello!I am xxx,a student in Class 10 ,Grade8,I am very glad to see you.And I'd like to know something about the students in your country.
Would you like to tell me how many hours do the students have class at school?
Many students in China include me, can write and read English passages well,but we always can't understand the English speakers or speak the fluent and idiomatic English.And I want to speak English well very much.So ,what should we do to improve our English listening and speaking?
Thank you!
谢谢！
“Could you tell me how many hours do the students study at school every week?”
我想改成“您能告诉我和我们差不多大的学生一天在学校学习多少个小时吗？他们有家庭作业吗？”，“你觉得说英语时我们应该注意什么？”这句话该怎么说？

请问“不能很地道流利地说英语”中的“地道”应怎样较好的表达呢？

谢谢！
（紧急啊！就明天下午啦~~~~(>_<)~~~~！谢谢！）

Answer 1

Hello!I am xxx from Class 10 ,Grade8. I am very glad to see you.And I'd like to know something about the students in your country.
May I ask u 2 questions?

1. Could you tell me how many hours do the students study at school everyweek?
2. Many students in China include me, can write and read English ,but we can't understand native speakers or speak very fluently .What should we do to improve our English skills?
Thank you!
口语不是书面语，所以帮你删掉了一些东西。 按照八年级水平来说你做的很棒追问

谢谢！
但我请问“不能很地道流利地说英语”中的“地道”应怎样较好的表达呢？
谢谢！

追答

其实不一定要和中文翻译的完全一致。
My English is not as fluent as native speakers.
或者My English is still Chinglish.
后面可以问Could you give me some advice? 能请您帮我提一些意见吗？

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