小学生英语作文及评语

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Answer 1

【篇一】小学生英语作文及评语

　　Miss Tang is my English teacher. She’s very pretty. She is tall and thin. She has two big eyes and a small mouth. Her hair is long. She likes cats very much. And she likes singing and dancing, too. Her English is very good. We often play games in English classes. She is very kind to us. We all love her.
　　评语：
　　这篇作文的题目是“我的英语老师”，是一篇介绍人物的作文。小作者开门见山，直接点题，首先介绍了英语老师的姓名，然后逐一介绍了她的外貌特征、喜好、英语水平、上课特点以及师生情感等。

【篇二】小学生英语作文及评语

　　Hello, my name is Lin Min.I live in ChangAn town.I study in No.1 primary school.I like my school.I go to school from Monday to Friday.And I like my weekend too.On Saturdays,I do homework in the morning.Then I eat lunch.I play computer games in the afternoon.I can play computer games only one hour.I play the piano at three o’clock.I like playing the piano. I can listen to music in the evening.I think it is so funny.On Sundays, I often learn English.In the evening.I must go to bed  early,because tomorrow I will go to school.
　　评语：本文小作者思路清晰，她的视角，情感，用语都能充分反映小学生的写作特点，使人倍感亲切。全文都透露出小作者的积极向上，做事井井有条的精神风貌。让人仿佛身临其境，感受她那忙碌而又充实的周末生活。

【篇三】小学生英语作文及评语

　　Zoom had a busy weekend. On Saturday morning, he washed his clothes and went to a park. He did his homework and went fishing on Saturday afternoon. On Sunday morning, he cleaned his room and visited his grandparents. He played football and watch TV on Sunday afternoon. Zoom was too tired.
　　评语：

　　写法：这篇习作是按时间顺序记叙了Zoom的周末活动。

　　时态：这篇文章可以用三种时态来写，由于本单元主要讲的是一般过去时态，所以我们采用一般过去时态比较合适。

　　句型：主语+动词过去式+过去时间。

　　注意：活动的相关表达法采用新旧知识结合的方法，但要注意动词过去式的拼写。

【篇四】小学生英语作文及评语

　　Hello, everyone! I am Tina. I am a lovely girl. I am 11 years old. My favourite seasons are summer and winter.
　　In summer, it's always sunny and hot. I can wear my nice skirts and dresses. I can swim in the sea, too. The sky is very blue. The clouds are white. The city is very beautiful.
　　Winter comes. It's white everywhere in my hometown. In winter, it's windy, snowy and cold. But I have a very good time in winter. I can ski. I can skate. I can make a snowman and play games in the snow, too. Oh, I am very happy!
　　How I love summer and winter!
　　评语：文章很清晰的写出不同季节的不同天气，以及应该穿的衣服，可以做的事情。而且语法正确，用词丰富。

【篇五】小学生英语作文及评语

　　Hello，my name is Zhang Songpei. I’m eleven years old. I study in Chang’an No. 1 Primary School in Dongguan City.
　　My school is very beautiful. Let’s have a look！After enter the school gate，there is a small square. Go through the square，there is a teaching building. The teachers’ offices are on first floor and they are on the left. Our principal’s office is on the second floor. Our principal is a lady. She’s strict，but kind. The classrooms are on the right of the teaching building. You can see many flowers around the teaching building. Near the teaching building，you can see a park. It’s small but beautiful. There is a river in the park. You can see some fish swimming in the river. How lively they are! Over the river，there is a small bridge. There is a gym in our school. In the gym，you can see many sports equipments. Near the gym，there is a big playground. Look！There are many students playing football. They are so happy!
　　I like my school very much!             
　　评语：本篇作文条例清晰，逻辑清楚，用词准确。小作者很详细、生动地介绍了自己的学校。