第1个回答 2013-12-22
After writing a semester of study, I know less than many of his. For example, also expression not the correct use of various patterns, sometimes will always make mistakes. In use, I will always be a small condition. In the note writing, I sometimes forget to write the date and period of the first two blanks. In the date format should also pay attention to. Sometimes I want to use some special sentence patterns, that caused the deduction. I think I could use some certain sentence after. In English writing, I will have the expression patterns of some Chinese English, this reminds me to usually pay more attention to some English writing way of thinking. In writing, I should avoid using the same word, should pay attention to the accumulation of vocabulary, can express the same meaning, different words are used to express. In usually follow the teacher's advice, on his composition more polished. I believe, only in this way, I am writing to improve.
第2个回答 2013-12-22
After a semester studying writing, I know a lot of their own deficiencies. For example, will not use the correct expression of various sentences, sometimes always make some small mistakes. The use of the clause, and I will always be some small state. On the note writing, I sometimes forget to write the date and the first two cells empty segment. Also note that the format of the date. Sometimes I want to use some special sentence that improper use of the points. I think I'll have to use some grasp of sentence. In English writing, I have some Chinese expressions in English, which reminds me always pay more attention to some ways of thinking in English writing. In the writing, I should be more use to avoid repeating the same word, pay attention to the accumulation of vocabulary, you can express the same meaning, using different words to express. In peacetime comply with the teacher's suggestions do modify their essay polish. I believe that the only way my writing can be improved.本回答被提问者采纳