求一份600-800字的英文入学自荐书（不要软件翻译的）

Question

由于父母要将自己送到新西兰留学，需要一份英文入学自荐，

自己也写过很多次，但是总是语法不过关。

我的英文语法不是很好，希望英文达人们可以帮助我，

写一份好的自荐书出来，感激不尽！

（不要翻译软件的，懂英文的应该都知道，翻出来乱七八糟的、）

由于很少用问问，分数不多，还请见谅。

下面是我的个人简历。

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姓名：LiChen
性别：女
年龄：19岁
来自：台湾
现居住：江苏省昆山市

爱好：唱歌、跳舞、绘画
特长：平面美工设计、电脑应用

个性：活泼，乐观积极，乐于帮助他人。

于2009年毕业于江苏省昆山市第二中学

在校期间严守纪律，尊敬师长，与同学和平相处。能够分清自己在所属集体中应发挥

的作用，能在集体中主动提出自己的观点。遇到挫折和失误从不灰心，也不固执，能

分析其中原因，想方设法战胜与克服。能观察其他同学的优点，取人之长，补己之短

，不自卑也不嫉妒他人。一直努力在实践中不断提升自己的各项能力。

对于美术方面有极大的兴趣，曾经参加校刊制作与版报美工设计，积极参加各类美术

比赛，曾在学校举办的“科技创新月设计比赛”中获得一等奖，作品受到老师与学生

的喜爱。我喜欢将别人意想不到的东西融入到一个设计中，让完成出来的作品更为新

颖。

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我想申请成为贵校的美工设计系一员，希望能在贵校进修，让我的爱好变为一个专业

强项，在未来的社会中发挥作用。

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因为是第一次写自荐，如果各位有经验，希望能在里面加点实用的语句。

问题补充：

不要线上翻译，不要照着我的原文翻译，

写好的我会追加分数。

感谢各位了。

Answer 1

Name: LiChen
Gender: Female
Age: 19 years
From: Taiwan
Living in: Kunshan City, Jiangsu Province

Hobbies: singing, dancing, painting
Features: Graphic graphic design, computer applications

Personality: lively, optimistic, positive, willing to help others.

In 2009 graduated from the Secondary School, Kunshan City, Jiangsu Province

In school discipline, respect teachers, and students live together in peace. To distinguish themselves should play in their respective collective

The role of collective initiative in their views. Setbacks and mistakes never lose heart, not stubborn, can

Analysis of the causes, ways to overcome and overcome. Other students can observe the advantages of taking a person to make up our own short

Not inferior nor envy others. Have been working hard in practice, the ability to continuously upgrade their.

For there is great interest in art, he joined the magazine Science reported that production and graphic design, and actively participate in various art

Competition, held in the school's "science and technology innovation competition on" the first prize by the teachers and students

Favorite. I like unexpected things other people into a design for a more complete work out of the new

Ying.

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I would like to apply for your school's graphic design department of one, hoping to study at your school, so my hobby into a profession

Strengths, in the future play a role in society.

Answer 2

My Name: LiChen
Gender: Female
Age: 19 years
From: Taiwan
Living in: Kunshan City, Jiangsu Province

Hobbies: singing, dancing, painting
Features: Graphic graphic design, computer applications

Personality: lively, optimistic, positive, willing to help others.

In 2009 graduated from the Secondary School, Kunshan City, Jiangsu Province

In school discipline, respect teachers, and students live together in peace. To distinguish themselves should play in their respective collective

The role of collective initiative in their views. Setbacks and mistakes never lose heart, not stubborn, can

of one, hoping to study at your school, so my hobby into a profession

Strengths, in the future play a role in society.

参考资料：看上面的

Answer 3

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