写作思路：要直接简化任务语言。在叙述中，我们要把直接叙述变成间接叙述，尽可能简化人物语言。这样，即使情节连贯，又使语句“简练”。
I have read a book named Harry Potter,the famous novel around the world.The writer created a wonderful and magical world,which is loved by all children in the world.
What I gained from the book is that you should have a good heart and not be afried of any difficulties.To be a brave and good person,halping the one who is in trouble.
Not only the people but the details in that book give me a deep image.I hope that if you have a chance to read it,you will like me,loving it.
译文：
我读过一本名叫《哈利·波特》的书，这本书是世界著名的小说。作者创造了一个奇妙而神奇的世界，这是全世界所有孩子都喜欢的。
我从这本书中得到的是，你应该有一颗善良的心，不畏惧任何困难。做一个勇敢善良的人，阻止陷入困境的人。
这本书中的人物和细节给了我深刻的印象。我希望如果你有机会读它，你会喜欢我，喜欢它。